Melodie, you have made some good progress with your portfolio and I can see you are working hard to catch up. Your photoshoot of Eden is your most successful of your second artist and should be explored further, creating collages, black and white edits and double exposure. Your last shoot and edits for Rosanna Jones demonstrates a low ability and I would describe as 'Moderate', rather than consistent or highly developed. Could we redraft these images so they are more reflective of your overall ability, as I don't want to bring your grade down due to lack of consistency.
In addition, you have captured alot of imagery but you aren't experimenting enough with the imagery you have. Make sure to…
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melodie al ghouch
Feb 09, 2022
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Thank you for your feedback miss, I have completed some more edits from the photoshoot of Eden and I will edit my last photoshoot (of Amal) in the technique you taught me in class.
https://hollandparkschoolobu.wixsite.com/lavenrazaunit2/copy-of-artist-analysis
Homework/Intervention tasks:
- Artist 1 -Print out photoshoot 1 & 4 and experiment with collage in the style of Rosanna Jones
- Artist 2- Print out photoshoot 1 & 2 for artist 2 and experiment with collage using black/coloured paper
- Print out acetate for second artist (colours)
https://www.ikea.com/gb/en/p/ribba-frame-white-80378423/
http://mabelsalkeldharmonyanddiscord.weebly.com/andrea-koporova--femme.html
Melodie, you have made some good progress with your portfolio and I can see you are working hard to catch up. Your photoshoot of Eden is your most successful of your second artist and should be explored further, creating collages, black and white edits and double exposure. Your last shoot and edits for Rosanna Jones demonstrates a low ability and I would describe as 'Moderate', rather than consistent or highly developed. Could we redraft these images so they are more reflective of your overall ability, as I don't want to bring your grade down due to lack of consistency.
In addition, you have captured alot of imagery but you aren't experimenting enough with the imagery you have. Make sure to…