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  • Writer: Oscar Hansen
    Oscar Hansen
  • Nov 25, 2021
  • 1 min read

Updated: Dec 8, 2021

Unit 2- Identity

Target grade: 7

 
 
 

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
May 16, 2022

Ideas to develop your portfolio: https://hollandparkschoolkfi.wixsite.com/lucrezialunit1/projects-3-3

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Feb 25, 2022

Artist 1: Capture images of sky to print off and experiment with objects in the style of this artist: https://cac-synagoguedelme.org/en/exhibitions/159-drawing-in-the-dark


Artist 2: Recapture images of ink in glass with OBU - could we also experiment with printing your images and lay a glass over the top and add ink and recapture.


Artist 3: Recapture images for your third artist adding layer of plastic to a white wall and projecting light on to the bags. In addition, could we do this in class and project your inky images on to the plastic.


Create a series of ideas for your final piece - purchase a series of frames to experiment with the composition of your first artist and using imagery from your…


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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Dec 16, 2021

Peer Assessment (Sienna) : The work you have currently produced is very impressive. To develop, I suggest that you print your work off and experiment with collage outside of Photoshop to refine and explore using a different method.

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Dec 15, 2021

http://emilycheungharmonydiscord.weebly.com/

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Dec 09, 2021

Very impressive work Oscar, you have really developed your ability to work independently with this particular artist and I'm impressed with the results. Your compositions are well considered and link directly to the artist. To develop, experiment with collage, printing your images and manlipuating your work by hand to see the effects. In addition, I would like you to come to intervention so we can scan your work, further developing it in terms of the composition.


This weekend, capture two new photoshoots, 1 for your first artist and a second for artist 2.


Could you look at Wolfgang Tillmans for your second artist?


Grade: 6 (aim for a 7!)

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