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  • asdismarian
  • Nov 25, 2021
  • 1 min read

Unit 2 - Identity

 
 
 

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Feb 24, 2022

Artist 1: Experimenting with mirroring (extending the canvas and/or layering the image on top and mirroring it over the original).


Your first photoshoot for this artist is really exciting (could you capture another photoshoot for this combining natural with elements of portraiture).


Artist 2: Capture another photoshoot for this artist in intervention, projecting your edits on to fabric to further develop.


Artist 3:

Contact sheet for last photoshoot for this artist.


Final Piece Planning:

Capture your final piece shoot combining Heather Hanson with your previous artist and exploring elements of video and series. Could we print your work out and place in white frames.


https://www.ikea.com/gb/en/p/ribba-frame-white-20378459/#content


40 x 50 cm white frame x 3


Grade: 7 (aim for an 8!)


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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Feb 09, 2022
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Meloon Apple
Meloon Apple
Dec 16, 2021

Peer assessment - I think the hours and time you have put it to these photographers is really impressive. I think you could add a bit more further developments more than just experimenting with colour, but overall the website looks really good and very pleasing to the eye. :)

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Dec 09, 2021

Asdis, it has been a delight to view your website. The artist you have selected is ambitious which has challenged you to work outside of your comfort zone. Your recording level is highly developed, demonstrated through your well considered compositions and use of lighting. To develop, I want you to focus on your AO2 experimentation. Capture a series of images of ink (in class) on paper to use to image blend with your development. I would like you to also consider composition and sequence in your work, adding 3 different images to the same canvas to explore the impact of 'series'.


I'm excited to see how you develop your work further with your new artist.


Keep up the good work.


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