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Updated: Mar 2, 2022

UNIT 2 - IDETITY


Target Grade = 5

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Mar 04, 2022

Artist 1:

- Submerge your developments for ELENA OGANESYAN in water and recapture: http://mabelsalkeldharmonyanddiscord.weebly.com/expired-film-study.html


Artist 2:

-Print off your developments and cover in plastic and recapture (experiment with the results)


Artist 3:

- Print off your images and cover in hand sanitiser and recapture (experiment with the results)


Grade: 7/8

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yasmeenzeidan
Mar 04, 2022
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Target Grdae - 5. I am going to focus on these three objectives you have given me in order to secure my Grade 8, if that is possible.

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Dec 07, 2021

A beautifully presented portfolio Yasmeen, it has been a pleasure to view your website today. Your photographs are well observed and link closely to the work of the artist. To develop, make sure that your redraft develops your work further, the second shoot looks too similar to the first and therefore doesn't allow you to extend your portfolio as far. Capture a new photoshoot with me in class/intervention in response to your first artist.


Could we experiment with taking portraits for a glass to distort the face: https://www.artlimited.net/4693/art/image-mystify-me/en/128871


Where is the contatc sheet for the inky photographs to double exposure with your portraits? (discuss in class)


Consider your next photographer carefully to extend your portfolio, generating work which demonstrates 'genuine…


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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Dec 03, 2021

http://millestephensonexam.weebly.com/angelo-lamparelli.html

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