video - going through the hanging development/ piece
Final piece >
- frame it to make a 3D looking collaged portrait
L deep frame
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Holland Park School OBU
Feb 22, 2022
It was pleasure to view your website Uma, your strengths lies in your experimentation and ability to refine your work over time. Your AO2 is currently highly developed, to improve I would like you to focus on your AO3 - recording, refining your annotation and your photoshoots.
Artist 1.
Print out your second redraft photoshoot and create a series of physical collages linking to the work of David Hockney's joiners.
Reference David Hockney's joiners (focusing on his portraits) to also add to your AO1.
Artist 2.
3. See me in class to support you with your textured acrylic painting developments (perhaps you could come to intervention to do this).
4. Make sure to finish all annotations for this segmen…
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umarubyalmond
Mar 04, 2022
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Thank you miss, I will look over my annotations and refine them. I will also complete each task set for me to improve my website and grade.
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Holland Park School OBU
Dec 07, 2021
It has been a joy to view your website Uma. Your experimentation and refinement is highly developed and demonstrates genuine discovery - which is excellent to see. I'd like to see you push your experimnetation even further with your current artist, ripping up parts of the faces and collaging them back together (see the pinterest board linked below that I have made for you to develop your work).
Your artist analysis is consistent, but needs refining further to move into highly developed for AO1. Make sure to fully discuss the conceptual, contextual, technical and visual elements of the work using this sheet to support you:
Thank you miss, I will refine my annotations and analyze Metra Jeanson's work more in the conceptual, contextual, technical and visual elements of her work.
checklist:
- physical, collaged developments - Jesse Draxler.
Final piece ideas/experimenting >
- hanging portrait, using string and 3D effect
L with new photoshoot,
L one just portrait
L the other body
- burn the paper
- cut the paper
- colour
- non colour - black and white.
video - going through the hanging development/ piece
Final piece >
- frame it to make a 3D looking collaged portrait
L deep frame
It was pleasure to view your website Uma, your strengths lies in your experimentation and ability to refine your work over time. Your AO2 is currently highly developed, to improve I would like you to focus on your AO3 - recording, refining your annotation and your photoshoots.
Artist 1.
Print out your second redraft photoshoot and create a series of physical collages linking to the work of David Hockney's joiners.
Reference David Hockney's joiners (focusing on his portraits) to also add to your AO1.
Artist 2.
3. See me in class to support you with your textured acrylic painting developments (perhaps you could come to intervention to do this).
4. Make sure to finish all annotations for this segmen…
It has been a joy to view your website Uma. Your experimentation and refinement is highly developed and demonstrates genuine discovery - which is excellent to see. I'd like to see you push your experimnetation even further with your current artist, ripping up parts of the faces and collaging them back together (see the pinterest board linked below that I have made for you to develop your work).
https://www.pinterest.co.uk/MsburleyHPS/uma/
Your artist analysis is consistent, but needs refining further to move into highly developed for AO1. Make sure to fully discuss the conceptual, contextual, technical and visual elements of the work using this sheet to support you:
https://www.photopedagogy.com/uploads/5/0/0/9/50097419/photography_vocabulary_support.pdf
https://www.photopedagogy.com/uploads/5/0/0/9/50097419/1410382_orig.png
https://www.photopedagogy.com/uploads/5/0/0/9/50097419/9759437_orig.png
Grade: 7
Well done Uma - aim for an 8!