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  • meriemboudaoud2007
  • Dec 9, 2021
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T A R G E T G R A D E : P 5

 
 
 

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meriemboudaoud2007
May 27, 2022

Refinement tasks:

- create 2 more sets of Hilly Van Eerten gifs (one set of colour-changing gifs and another set of layered cranes)

- highlight success for developments

- mention 'refinement' and 'drawing' throughout portfolio

- add a mood board and some research of buildings that have been refurbished to concept page

- upload new ink photoshoot and annotate

- create moving gifs out of ink developments

- edit more Michael Wesley compositions

- add to final piece ideas

- ensure all annotation is complete and add to annotations (*)

- experiment with video in your work

- present your work in different ways at the end of each page

- add process logs to all sets of developments

-…

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Mar 03, 2022

Artist 1:

- Present your GIFs as larger scale images to showcase them on your site

- Highlight success from your charcoal developments

- Speak to me in class about creating a sequence of pieces on 1 canvas


Artist 2:

- Reshoot your ink developments with me in intervention


Artist 3:

- Annotation for all developments/contact sheets for artist 3


Grade: 7/8

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meriemboudaoud2007
Apr 19, 2022
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Artist 1:

- Highlight success from your charcoal developments.

- create gifs out of charcoal and fabric images.

- experiment with composition.

Artist 2:

- Reshoot your ink developments with me in intervention

- experiment with composition


Artist 3:

- Annotation for all developments/contact sheets for artist 3

- create colour changing gifs

- experiment with colour coded composition

General:

- add more detail to artist analysis and annotations.

Grade: 7/8

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Feb 21, 2022

Artist 1:

- Image blend your fabric developments with your earlier Idris Khan developments.

- Create a series of charcoal backgrounds on paper and image blend with your Idris Khan cityscapes.


Artist 2:

- Consider the composition of your 'series of 3' developments carefully. Make sure the images are similar so they create a relationship between them (rather than having one that doesn't fit the shape/composition of the images). In addition, you could add several additional images on top of this compositions (ask me in class to demonstrate).


- Capture images of white acrylic on black card and image blend with your second artist developments.


Artist 3:

- Complete your annotation for your second artist.

- Add your tracing paper…


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meriemboudaoud2007
Apr 19, 2022
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Artist 2:

- Consider the composition of your 'series of 3' developments carefully. Make sure the images are similar so they create a relationship between them (rather than having one that doesn't fit the shape/composition of the images). In addition, you could add several additional images on top of this compositions (ask me in class to demonstrate).


Artist 3:

- Complete your annotation for your second artist.

- Add your tracing paper developments to your 3rd artist page

- Capture images of your larger outcomes and present them as your final piece ideas.


Grade: 7

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Jan 17, 2022

Hilly Van Eerten

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Jan 17, 2022

Third artist: Brian Hubble

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