- Your annotation is a little too personal, for example 'I plan to catch up in intention', try to write your annotations a little like an essay, analysing your work in a formal and critical way.
An excellent start to your new project Mataj, I can see you are very inspired by your new subject matter which is excellent to see. Your strength in photography lies in your ability to record and capture imagery relevant to your intentions, as well as the editing process. However, the written element is carrying much lower and needs to be refined. When writing your artist analysis, approach it the same way you would an essay. You are currently writing too informally, you must make sure to use key terms to describe your artist. Use the questions below to support you:
1. Basic Information
The name of the photographer - What country are they from? (This is important as it puts…
Artist 1:
- Further detail for your artist analysis page using the questions on my website: http://msburleyphotography.weebly.com/ao1.html
- Your annotation is a little too personal, for example 'I plan to catch up in intention', try to write your annotations a little like an essay, analysing your work in a formal and critical way.
- Capture a new shoot with OBU experimenting with eyes (see exemplar for ideas: http://laetitiafelixharmonyanddiscord.weebly.com/miki-takahashi.html
- Missing annotation for Artist 1 redraft developments/further developments
Artist 2:
- Print images off in intervention and layer over dead flowers/water to capture an exciting new photoshoot.
Artist 3:
- Analyse in greater detail 'metamorphosis'
- Annotate your contact sheet
- Upload your developments for your first photoshoot
You have alot…
http://identitykalan.weebly.com/stephanie-jung.html
Double exposure website
Exemplar portfolio exploring double exposure: http://kalanexam.weebly.com/metamorphosis.html
(level 6/7)
An excellent start to your new project Mataj, I can see you are very inspired by your new subject matter which is excellent to see. Your strength in photography lies in your ability to record and capture imagery relevant to your intentions, as well as the editing process. However, the written element is carrying much lower and needs to be refined. When writing your artist analysis, approach it the same way you would an essay. You are currently writing too informally, you must make sure to use key terms to describe your artist. Use the questions below to support you:
1. Basic Information
The name of the photographer - What country are they from? (This is important as it puts…