FEEDBACK: unit 2 identity
- Kathija Yousuf
- Nov 26, 2021
- 1 min read
Updated: Dec 9, 2021
Feedback:
Kathija, I'm very concerned with how little work you have in your portfolio, so little that I am unable to mark it. Please make sure you have uploaded all your work to your website in the lesson today so I can mark it thoroughly for tomorrow's lesson.
You should have the following on your website:
Artist analysis 1 (300 – 500 words)
Photoshoot plan
Photoshoot 1
Contact sheet with annotation (200 words)
20 developments with annotation (200 words)
Photoshoot 2
Contact sheet with annotation (200 words)
20 further developments with annotation (200 words)
ARTIST ANALYSIS 2 (300 – 500 words)
Photoshoot plan
Grade: U
Final piece ideas: https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/340655159307896577/
Exemplar portfolio: http://joeltalbotidentity.weebly.com/
Artist 1:
- Annotation for 1st contact sheet
- Experiments with composition - see me in class to discuss how to execute these
Artist 2:
- 9 edits for your first photoshoot and 9 further developments with annotation for each
- Your redraft for this isn't as successful as your first shoot, could we change these around so it demonstrates progress?
Artist 3:
- Further developments with annotation
- Developments and further developments with annotation for your redraft
Kathijathul, why do you have so little work in this portfolio? You have some stunning edits but due to the amount of work, your grade is much lower.
Grade :4/5
Exemplar portfolio: http://joeltalbotidentity.weebly.com/
Peer assessment - quantity of annotation is great, artist analysis could be abit longer. Developments for first and second photoshoot are great but add the 3rd photoshoot to your site! :)
Kathija, I'm very concerned with how little work you have in your portfolio, so little that I am unable to mark it. Please make sure you have uploaded all your work to your website in the lesson today so I can mark it thoroughly for tomorrow's lesson.
You should have the following on your website:
Artist analysis 1 (300 – 500 words)
Photoshoot plan
Photoshoot 1
Contact sheet with annotation (200 words)
20 developments with annotation (200 words)
Photoshoot 2
Contact sheet with annotation (200 words)
20 further developments with annotation (200 words)
ARTIST ANALYSIS 2 (300 – 500 words)
Photoshoot plan
Grade: U