- Add more detail to your artist analysis, could you make a comment on the concepts behind the work: perhaps part of the artist's identity is associated with the two cities: New York and London and she has represented that connection through double exposing the two cities.
Artist 2:
- Further research into the meaning behind your second artists work to add to the concept area of your analysis
- Redraft for Sven Pfrommer in class experimenting with different colours/inks to double expose with your buildings
- Add more detail to your artist analysis, could you make a comment on the concepts behind the work: perhaps part of the artist's identity is associated with the two cities: New York and London and she has represented that connection through double exposing the two cities.
- Create a GIF from your collage developments (see me in intervention/class) to show you how execute this.
Artist 2:
- Further research into the meaning behind your second artists work to add to the concept area of your analysis
- Redraft for Sven Pfrommer in class experimenting with different colours/inks to double expose with your buildings
OBU to print your work on tracing paper to experiment with the lightbox to…
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Holland Park School OBU
Dec 09, 2021
A good start to your new project Bersbel, I can see a consistent ability to respond in the style of your chosen artist and I can see a natural progression in your editing ability through your first artist. To develop, consider ways to experiment further outside of your portfolio. Could we print off your work in intervention and layer tracing paper over the top and then record the effects. This will help increase your AO2 and take your portfolio in an exciting new direction.
Grade: 5 (aim for a 6!)
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bersabelsimon
Dec 10, 2021
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Target: I will experiment with a range of material by printing out my images and I will layer tracing paper over the top in intervention.
Artist 1:
- Add more detail to your artist analysis, could you make a comment on the concepts behind the work: perhaps part of the artist's identity is associated with the two cities: New York and London and she has represented that connection through double exposing the two cities.
Artist 2:
- Further research into the meaning behind your second artists work to add to the concept area of your analysis
- Redraft for Sven Pfrommer in class experimenting with different colours/inks to double expose with your buildings
Ideas for development: http://imandaciidentity.weebly.com/
Grade: 6
Artist 1:
- Add more detail to your artist analysis, could you make a comment on the concepts behind the work: perhaps part of the artist's identity is associated with the two cities: New York and London and she has represented that connection through double exposing the two cities.
- Create a GIF from your collage developments (see me in intervention/class) to show you how execute this.
Artist 2:
- Further research into the meaning behind your second artists work to add to the concept area of your analysis
- Redraft for Sven Pfrommer in class experimenting with different colours/inks to double expose with your buildings
OBU to print your work on tracing paper to experiment with the lightbox to…
A good start to your new project Bersbel, I can see a consistent ability to respond in the style of your chosen artist and I can see a natural progression in your editing ability through your first artist. To develop, consider ways to experiment further outside of your portfolio. Could we print off your work in intervention and layer tracing paper over the top and then record the effects. This will help increase your AO2 and take your portfolio in an exciting new direction.
Grade: 5 (aim for a 6!)