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- Nov 25, 2021
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Updated: Dec 10, 2021
Unit 2: identity
A good start to your new project Sidra, I can see you are working hard to keep up with the pace of the course. I would like you to focus on your recording ability. Currently, your photographs do not show a clear link to the work of Daniella Zalcman. You need to capture your images during the day in central London, capturing some of the beautiful parts of the city to image blend together. Do you have a camera at home you can use to capture your images?
Grade: 5
Artist 1:
- Redraft 1st photoshoot (shooting in the natural light) of interesting building in London. Could you go to Tower Bridge/Canary Wharf.
- Ensure 12 developments for each photoshoot and 12 further developments.
- In intervention, print off with OBU developments on tracing paper and capture on lightbox.
Artist 2:
- Capture new images (from Tate Modern building) for second artist, as well as portraits with OBU in intervention. Create a series of developments from new photoshoot to improve artist 2.
Artist 3:
- Create a series of low key hand developments (aiming for 12 developments and 12 further developments) with annotation
Exemplar work: http://imandaciidentity.weebly.com/idris-khan.html
Peer Assessment: Experiment Further with your photoshoot plan for your Jasper James project.