- Experiment with sequence in your further developments to further develop your work (see me in class to show you have to do this), (started)
Artist 2:
- Make sure to create further developments for your tracing paper photographs (could we redraft these in class?)
Artist 3:
- Missing annotation for your third artist
- Your first development for your further developments is your most success, see me in class to show you have to refine the rest of these
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Holland Park School OBU
Mar 03, 2022
Artist 1:
- The writing for your photoshoot plan is too small and I cannot read it, please make it at least font size 12 and re-upload it
- The presentation of your first artist needs improves, make sure all titles are added and that you are leaving an appropriate amount of space between each series.
- Experiment with sequence in your further developments to further develop your work (see me in class to show you have to do this)
Artist 2:
- See comments above regarding photoshoot plan
- Make sure to create further developments for your tracing paper photographs (could we redraft these in class?)
Artist 3:
- Missing annotation for your third artist
- Missing…
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Holland Park School OBU
Dec 08, 2021
A growing understanding of the visual language of your pages and a clear link in your photoshoot to your chosen artist. Currently your AO2 experimentation is very low and needs improving to meet your potential. View this website: http://joeltalbotidentity.weebly.com/masao-yamamoto.html for ideas on how to experiment with your current photoshoot to further develop and extend your work.
Consider your concept carefully - what are you exploring and why?
Grade: 4/5
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Ilyaas had
Dec 10, 2021
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Target for O2 to experiment with more range such as adding grain and adding different burnt paper overlay's
Artist 1:
- Experiment with sequence in your further developments to further develop your work (see me in class to show you have to do this), (started)
Artist 2:
- Make sure to create further developments for your tracing paper photographs (could we redraft these in class?)
Artist 3:
- Missing annotation for your third artist
- Your first development for your further developments is your most success, see me in class to show you have to refine the rest of these
Artist 1:
- The writing for your photoshoot plan is too small and I cannot read it, please make it at least font size 12 and re-upload it
- The presentation of your first artist needs improves, make sure all titles are added and that you are leaving an appropriate amount of space between each series.
- Experiment with sequence in your further developments to further develop your work (see me in class to show you have to do this)
Artist 2:
- See comments above regarding photoshoot plan
- Make sure to create further developments for your tracing paper photographs (could we redraft these in class?)
Artist 3:
- Missing annotation for your third artist
- Missing…
A growing understanding of the visual language of your pages and a clear link in your photoshoot to your chosen artist. Currently your AO2 experimentation is very low and needs improving to meet your potential. View this website: http://joeltalbotidentity.weebly.com/masao-yamamoto.html for ideas on how to experiment with your current photoshoot to further develop and extend your work.
Consider your concept carefully - what are you exploring and why?
Grade: 4/5