You have some stunning work Firdaws but there are lots of gaps in your work that need to be completed if you are to achieve a 6/7. You have the potential, but need to response to my feedback.
Grade: 5 (aim for a 6 or 7!)
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Holland Park School OBU
Mar 01, 2022
Artist 1:
- Limited artist analysis, this needs to be refined and improved if you wish to achieve a level 6 or above. Please answer the questions on my website to improve your analysis: http://msburleyphotography.weebly.com/ao1.html
- Print work in intervention and collage more words on top (using magazines)
Artist 2:
- Artist analysis needs improving and currently only demonstrates some to moderate ability, you should be aiming for consistent or highly developed. Make sure you to discuss why you have selected this artist, what are interested in exploring through their work?
- Print work in intervention and paint Arabic on top and scan.
- Annotate all developments
- Create further developments from last shoot on this page: mirroring and double…
A good start to your new project Firdaws. I can see you are considering the lighting, composition and camera angles carefully when capturing your photographs, and I can see a direct link to your chosen artist.
Make sure to develop your work, experimenting with composition and colour look up. Please view the following website to support you with your experimentation (AO2): http://maralidentity.weebly.com/peter-devito.html
Artist 1:
Artist 2:
Artist 3:
- Annotation for contact sheet
- Annotation for developments series
You have some stunning work Firdaws but there are lots of gaps in your work that need to be completed if you are to achieve a 6/7. You have the potential, but need to response to my feedback.
Grade: 5 (aim for a 6 or 7!)
Artist 1:
- Limited artist analysis, this needs to be refined and improved if you wish to achieve a level 6 or above. Please answer the questions on my website to improve your analysis: http://msburleyphotography.weebly.com/ao1.html
- Print work in intervention and collage more words on top (using magazines)
Artist 2:
- Artist analysis needs improving and currently only demonstrates some to moderate ability, you should be aiming for consistent or highly developed. Make sure you to discuss why you have selected this artist, what are interested in exploring through their work?
- Print work in intervention and paint Arabic on top and scan.
- Annotate all developments
- Create further developments from last shoot on this page: mirroring and double…
http://yasminwahbisidentity.weebly.com/shirin-neshat.html
http://identitytasnimraihani.weebly.com/shirin-neshat.html
http://imanyassinidentity.weebly.com/shirin-neshat.html
A good start to your new project Firdaws. I can see you are considering the lighting, composition and camera angles carefully when capturing your photographs, and I can see a direct link to your chosen artist.
Make sure to develop your work, experimenting with composition and colour look up. Please view the following website to support you with your experimentation (AO2): http://maralidentity.weebly.com/peter-devito.html
Grade 5/6