Improve mindmap and moodboard - creating a direct link to your idea. Keywords:
- Organism
- Bacteria
- Growth
- Biology
- Petri dish
Artist 1:
- Annotate GIFs
- Experiment with moving image with OBU (intervention)
- Print off bacteria photographs on acetate and experiment with lightbox
Artist 2:
- Separate black and white developments (development series 1) and annotate each individual gallery.
Artist 3:
- Improve artist analysis for third artist
- Print images on acetate with OBU for third artist and experiment with lightbox and layering
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rosie redman
Mar 07, 2022
Artist 1:
- Create a series of developments exploring the shapes of petri dishes in the style of your artist.
- Experiment with double exposure
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Holland Park School OBU
Feb 24, 2022
I can see much progress in your portfolio Rosie which is excellent to see. There are many strengths exhibited throughout your website, especially in relation to your recording AO3. Your weakest area current is your artist analysis (AO1), which needs improving to achieve a 6 across your portfolio. In addition, you need to ensure you have created a final piece for this project to achieve 100% of the marks across the 4 objectives.
Your redraft for photoshoot for your second artist is really exciting and could be developed further, for example, double exposure or a black and white series which would link well to your third artist.
Grade: 5
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rosie redman
Dec 16, 2021
with the bacteria pictures maybe choose brighter colours
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Holland Park School OBU
Dec 08, 2021
A good start to your new project Rosie. There is a clear progression in your portfolio and you have experimented with a range of techniques in Photoshop to a consistent level. To develop, experiment with creating the unique petri dish shapes exhibited in Klari Reiss' work.
Improve mindmap and moodboard - creating a direct link to your idea. Keywords:
- Organism
- Bacteria
- Growth
- Biology
- Petri dish
Artist 1:
- Annotate GIFs
- Experiment with moving image with OBU (intervention)
- Print off bacteria photographs on acetate and experiment with lightbox
Artist 2:
- Separate black and white developments (development series 1) and annotate each individual gallery.
Artist 3:
- Improve artist analysis for third artist
- Print images on acetate with OBU for third artist and experiment with lightbox and layering
Artist 1:
- Create a series of developments exploring the shapes of petri dishes in the style of your artist.
- Experiment with double exposure
I can see much progress in your portfolio Rosie which is excellent to see. There are many strengths exhibited throughout your website, especially in relation to your recording AO3. Your weakest area current is your artist analysis (AO1), which needs improving to achieve a 6 across your portfolio. In addition, you need to ensure you have created a final piece for this project to achieve 100% of the marks across the 4 objectives.
Your redraft for photoshoot for your second artist is really exciting and could be developed further, for example, double exposure or a black and white series which would link well to your third artist.
Grade: 5
with the bacteria pictures maybe choose brighter colours
A good start to your new project Rosie. There is a clear progression in your portfolio and you have experimented with a range of techniques in Photoshop to a consistent level. To develop, experiment with creating the unique petri dish shapes exhibited in Klari Reiss' work.
View this level 6 website to support your development: http://gentianadervishiidentity.weebly.com/
Level 5