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  • bizzlexox
  • Nov 25, 2021
  • 1 min read

Unit 2 - identity

 
 
 

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Holland Park School OBU
Holland Park School OBU
Feb 25, 2022

Artist 1:

- Redraft your photoshoot plan adding detailed annotation on what you are capturing and why: http://msburleyphotography.weebly.com/uploads/1/1/9/8/119822253/112667955.jpg


Artist 2:

- Complete your analysis for your second artist

- Create your photoshoot plan for your second artist

- Complete your annotation for your contact sheet

- Capture a redraft photoshoot for your second artist in class with OBU


Artist 3:

- Artist analysis for your third artist

- Contact sheet annotation

- Development annotation

- Further developments (exploring double exposure)

- Redraft photoshoot with OBU in intervention


This portfolio has moments are beautifully quality and stunning edits, however you are missing a significant amount of work Francesca, so your grade is a lot lower than your ability.


Grade 4/5

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bieeumalak
Dec 16, 2021

Peer assessment


I deeply enjoyed your website, and the aesthetic surrounding the website, I enjoy the highly detailed analysis and the creativity and effort placed into your photos, I think to further improve your website, you could include more further developments and edit them in different styles, or experiment with different filters etc!


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