Laurence Demaison development series 1 annotation + liquify images annotation
15.02.22
Laurence Demaison developments annotation (curve/colour look up/mirroring) Could you combine your annotation for all three, rather than writing for each?
Elizabeth, you have an innate skill in recording and capturing your imagery. Your understanding of composition, lighting and camera angles demonstrates a highly developed skill and as a result, you have captured imagery which is visually exciting. I would like you to focus on your AO2 experimentation and refinement. Make sure that you are trying out different techniques in Photoshop: mirroring, image blending, colour look up filters, black and white to experiment and discovery new ways to produce imagery. Please read the checklist below for your targets to improve your portfolio:
Checklist tasks:
- Discuss tone/line and space in annotation for artist 1 (see my note)
- 2 more developments for your 1 artist redraft to create an even number…
Elizabeth, as mentioned below, your ability to record is highly developed (AO3), but due to lack of annotation and development (AO2) you are currently not meeting your target grade of a 7. Make sure to create 15 developments for each photoshoot and 15 further development experimenting with different tools in photoshop. The further developments are important to demonstrate your ability refine your work and develop your ideas.
Checklist tasks:
Fantastic and Strange:
Mindmap and Moodboard - Complete
Mari Mahr Artist Analysis (300 - 500 words) - Complete
Mari Mahr - Contact sheet with annotation - Complete
Mari Mahr - Developments & annotation (20) - Incomplete (missing developments and annotation)
Mari Mahr Redraft Contact Sheet & annotation - (Missing)
Mari Mahr…
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Elizabeth Woodthorpe
Dec 16, 2021
Peer Assessment:
Add more in depth artist analysis to your work. For instance, add your opinion and possibly state what questions you would ask the artists if you had the chance to.
12.02.22
1st Artist – redraft developments annotation & redraft development ‘highlighting success’ annotation
1st Artist ‘Experimenting with composition/curve’ annotation
Keywords: low key lighting, muted colours, distorted, twisted, positive/negative space, trapped
13.02.22
1st Artist – colour look up developments annotation + Experimenting with image blending annotation
Extension: could you print these images and put them underwater and recapture? (burn them etc)
14.02.22
2nd Artist - Laurence Demaison photoshoot plan
Laurence Demaison contact sheet annotation (1st photoshoot)
Laurence Demaison development series 1 annotation + liquify images annotation
15.02.22
Laurence Demaison developments annotation (curve/colour look up/mirroring) Could you combine your annotation for all three, rather than writing for each?
16.02.22
Laurence Demaison redraft photoshoot contact sheet annotation
17.02.22
Laurence Demaison redraft developments annotation…
Elizabeth, you have an innate skill in recording and capturing your imagery. Your understanding of composition, lighting and camera angles demonstrates a highly developed skill and as a result, you have captured imagery which is visually exciting. I would like you to focus on your AO2 experimentation and refinement. Make sure that you are trying out different techniques in Photoshop: mirroring, image blending, colour look up filters, black and white to experiment and discovery new ways to produce imagery. Please read the checklist below for your targets to improve your portfolio:
Checklist tasks:
- Discuss tone/line and space in annotation for artist 1 (see my note)
- 2 more developments for your 1 artist redraft to create an even number…
Exemplar website to support your annotation:
http://identityestelle.weebly.com/noell-oszvald.html
Elizabeth, as mentioned below, your ability to record is highly developed (AO3), but due to lack of annotation and development (AO2) you are currently not meeting your target grade of a 7. Make sure to create 15 developments for each photoshoot and 15 further development experimenting with different tools in photoshop. The further developments are important to demonstrate your ability refine your work and develop your ideas.
Checklist tasks:
Fantastic and Strange:
Mindmap and Moodboard - Complete
Mari Mahr Artist Analysis (300 - 500 words) - Complete
Mari Mahr - Contact sheet with annotation - Complete
Mari Mahr - Developments & annotation (20) - Incomplete (missing developments and annotation)
Mari Mahr Redraft Contact Sheet & annotation - (Missing)
Mari Mahr…
Peer Assessment:
Add more in depth artist analysis to your work. For instance, add your opinion and possibly state what questions you would ask the artists if you had the chance to.