Aldridge, you have some stunning photographs and development in your portfolio which demonstrate a highly developed ability to catch imagery. However, I can see you aren't working on your portfolio at home, or uploading your work which has had a great impact on your grade.
You should have 3 artists in your portfolio with at least 2 photoshoots per artist. There is some evidence of annotation, but this is minimal across the span on your portfolio. Make sure when you are discussing the work of artists and your own work that you are considering the concepts behind the work. You are focusing primarily on minimalism and simplicity in your images - why is that interesting or important? What effect does…
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Holland Park School OBU
Dec 07, 2021
Aldridge, why have you uploaded your old shoot? We need to redraft and remove this shoot as it doesn't show any connection to the artist and you will not be graded very highly. You need to come to intervention on Thursday and Friday this week to catch up.
Aldridge, you have some stunning photographs and development in your portfolio which demonstrate a highly developed ability to catch imagery. However, I can see you aren't working on your portfolio at home, or uploading your work which has had a great impact on your grade.
You should have 3 artists in your portfolio with at least 2 photoshoots per artist. There is some evidence of annotation, but this is minimal across the span on your portfolio. Make sure when you are discussing the work of artists and your own work that you are considering the concepts behind the work. You are focusing primarily on minimalism and simplicity in your images - why is that interesting or important? What effect does…
Aldridge, why have you uploaded your old shoot? We need to redraft and remove this shoot as it doesn't show any connection to the artist and you will not be graded very highly. You need to come to intervention on Thursday and Friday this week to catch up.
Grade 2 (6 grades under target)
Target grade 8